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Last post 01-07-2008 1:15 PM by Diablo. 3 replies.
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  • 01-02-2008 4:49 PM

    • Karasaph
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    • Germany, NRW
    • Posts 17

    Art trade

    Hello everyone.

    I wrote two poems for ahastar on his Art trade. Both peoms. The one in german was just over 2 pages, but I thought I need to do something small in english, too. So I wrote one actually pretty quickly because writing poems in English is far more difficult. I did't get a headline though.

     

    First rule

     

    The Faibanx hit me right on the spot

    And you see where I got.

    Right now with Ahastar

    Who is *looks around* underpaw!

     

    [I’m] Mashing him and torturing him!

    Feeling my victim

    Pinned down between footsole and the ground!

    He’s a nice plaything I found!

     

    If you squeeze him nasty

    Bones [in him] shadder pasty

    Blood running like a waterfall

    Because he crossed my footfall

     

    You hear cracks, snaps and a burst

    And Karasaph’s climax outburst!

    You see feet smushing the demon raptor

    From Karasaph his assassinator!

     

    Now Ahastar is dead

    Ann all other small ones have to dread

    To die as well cruelly

    Picked out accidentally.

     

    Objects bigger than 1 foot have to be squisished and destroyed by the same.
  • 01-02-2008 9:24 PM In reply to

    Re: Art trade

    Well, that was very thoughtful to make on in English so we could share in the squishiness as well!  ;)  Very well done!

    LD5
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  • 01-03-2008 5:49 AM In reply to

    • Ahastar
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    • Joined on 06-17-2007
    • Nürnberg, Germany
    • Posts 37

    Re: Art trade

    Hell yes, they were both quite a nice and fun read! :)
    Great that you decided to give our poor English only members something to read and rhyme with as well. ;)

    "I contend that we are both atheists. I just believe in one fewer god than you do. When you understand why you dismiss all the other possible gods, you will understand why I dismiss yours..."
    - Stephen F. Roberts -
  • 01-07-2008 1:15 PM In reply to

    Re: Art trade

    *Rumbles happily at the poem* It makes me want to step on Ahastar.

     Very nice job, Karasaph!

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