Lava Dome Five

Finaly I did a more updated pic of Zasia, but I'm definatly going to have to do this comic that I'm working on for Nova now. As Zasia is going to be featured in it and I feel obligated to try to right the wrongs.

 For one thing, I need to make her more gator-like- one should be able to look at her and know that she is all gator.

Anouther thing I have beef with, is well...that's just the thing, not enough meat on her.  I imagine Zasia to be rather on the hefty side, though I think I at least kept her from being twiggy...let me put this way. She is chubby with love, and when I say that, I mean there is alot of sweet gator to huggle up to.

 And finaly a third but very minor thing- I didn't have any pink pencils, so I had to make due and use red for her lipstick, hair bow, and crissing bra.

Anyways, here she is, enjoy.

Overall design is good, armour well-conceived (not to mention cool-looking); if you do plan that stuff, keep doing it, and if you don't, well, don't piss off your muse.

The head and upper body came out well; it seems like what you were trying for there came across without a hitch. The hat would be in the style, but I'm not sure it'd be necessary for a reppy, considering they don't sunburn, although if it's just worn for fashion, or to mask Zasia's identity, then I couldn't object. Like I mentioned on Faibanx, the red lipstick is a little much considering most reptiles don't have much in the lines of naturally highlighted lips.

The arm on the viewer's left looks a little longish in the forearm, which could probably be corrected just by sliding the little wrinkle in the fabric down a bit. The rotation on the other arm will seem just a little off, after looking at it for a while.

Just because of the position of the leg, it's hard to infer that the fabric is still up-against the surface, and therefore makes the skirt look more like an apron (i.e.: no wraparound) when considering the way the tail looks. 

As for the peds, I'd say that the clawtips on the (viewer's) right foot don't curl down enough. And it may sound weird, but I kinda like 'em white.

Okay, so – kickass props, ever-improving anatomy, too much lipstick.