Legacy LD5

PICS OR IT DIDN'T HAPPEN!!

*is trying to lighten up the mood*

I was infact XD.., Lighten up you silly Raptor.

Nice ^^

Hmm, I like how you made the dragon seem a little bit meaner, but... what happened to all the details? "He spat me back out onto his palm after an hour had gone by." I'm not really into vore all that much, but you know... there's no descriptive language at all! You said this was eight pages? Eight pages with no details? I'd like to see you pull that off. Then again, please don't.

Unfortunately for you, Zaggy, there's a technique called "Splitting the Second," briefly meaning that the feeling about the length of time about an event can be expanded or compressed for the purpose of tone. The "mean" dragon, doesn't have a "violent" vibe to it.

The speed of what's happening seems like you're taking the damage quite easily rather than under an influence.

OTHERWISE, where this is going will hopefully remain in the same path of what you want to say and not biased from being tweaked by what others say before it is posted.

So you tell us. But what if I applied some tape across your mouth and let the story speak for itself? That's going to be different.

Oh, you.